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Saturday, August 13, 2016

Animal

In the animal wisdom of the archaic I stake my claim

in a time before claims, before stakes

in the oneiric, the telluric, the cthonic



My lizard mind jumps ahead, in mineral rhythm

In a clearing I rest a bit, then resume my way

through the dense vegetation






2 comments:

Leslie B. said...

I am actually starting to like this, I mean it would need work but I like the progression and I like the last line

Jonathan said...

I think think it should go on longer or maybe be part of something else.